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chasil 15 hours ago [-]
The play and motion picture Wit by Margaret Edson fixates on a poem by John Donne, Death be not Proud.
The fixation is on the last line of the poem:
And death shall be no more; death, thou shalt die.
The assertion is that Donne did not intend the use of a semicolon, and converting it to a comma significantly alters the meaning, profoundly uplifting the aura of spirituality.
"Nothing but a breath—a comma—separates life from life everlasting. It is very simple really. With the original punctuation restored, death is no longer something to act out on a stage, with exclamation points. It’s a comma, a pause."
everybodyknows 15 hours ago [-]
The author quotes: "So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past.”
Then comments:
> I think that “beat” and “borne” lack visual concreteness. Shouldn’t it be “paddle”? “Paddle” sounds a little silly, but that’s the metaphor Fitzgerald is using. (Those boats must be canoes, not steamboats. A steamboat wouldn’t care that much about a current.)
A reminder of the obscurity of Fitzgerald's analogy, which is specific to the technology of sailing: A "beat" is a course that will take the boat upwind -- always a challenge. And if the current of the water is pointed downwind, perhaps impossible.
Somehow none of the New Yorker editors caught this either.
rao-v 10 hours ago [-]
This is a good catch! The choice of beat here to my ear is meant to capture both a sense of urgency (beating a drum to set the pace for rowers) and beating upwind (tacking frequently). The whole article feels a little undercooked and peevishly underinformed for the New Yorker.
wpollock 17 hours ago [-]
Dang says tomhow is the better moderator.
Dang, says tomhow, is the better moderator.
jazzprogramming 10 hours ago [-]
- Verily I say unto thee today, shalt thou be with Me in Paradise.
- But when, Lord, when?!
- Verily I say unto thee, today shalt thou be with Me in Paradise.
- Ahhhh.
JadeNB 3 hours ago [-]
> - Verily I say unto thee today, shalt thou be with Me in Paradise.
Shouldn't this one be "Verily I say unto thee today, thou shalt be with Me in Paradise?"
sharts 13 hours ago [-]
English can be so imprecise.
robotresearcher 13 hours ago [-]
Those sentences are perfectly precise. Yes they are sensitive to the commas, just as they are to the whitespace and spelling.
piskov 18 hours ago [-]
> what about, say, the war in Gaza?
That was not on my top-5 list of things that may be in that article.
chrisweekly 4 hours ago [-]
"Let's eat, grandma!"
vs
"Let's eat grandma!"
walrus01 13 hours ago [-]
Sometimes it's the difference between helping your uncle, Jack, off a horse. Or helping your uncle jack off a horse.
N_Lens 11 hours ago [-]
I helped my Uncle, Jack, off a horse!
noworld 19 hours ago [-]
Let’s eat, Grandma.
euroderf 6 hours ago [-]
Help! Murder! Police!
Kuyawa 14 hours ago [-]
One thing I refuse to write is a period at the end of a sentence
Don't ask me why, perhaps an OCD of the many I suffer, but I don't see the point of that if a new paragraph is two lines below
And they look ugly in web pages for titles, feature blocks, testimonials, etc
AI likes to use them everywhere when building web apps. I hate that and have to go find/replace every dot next to a closing tag
I'll have to refine my skills.md "Don't end paragraphs with a period"
Guthwine 4 hours ago [-]
I think the real question is why you are starting a new paragraph after every sentence It makes your posts read as stilted and a bit difficult to follow Do you still use question marks if you ask a question or an exclamation point Curious to what you do when you write on paper but let me know
kstrauser 13 hours ago [-]
That sounds like an excellent idea if you primarily don't communicate with humans.
cobbzilla 12 hours ago [-]
go ask your LLM to make a browser plugin to remove all periods, then stop complaining here
The fixation is on the last line of the poem:
And death shall be no more; death, thou shalt die.
The assertion is that Donne did not intend the use of a semicolon, and converting it to a comma significantly alters the meaning, profoundly uplifting the aura of spirituality.
The play:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wit_(play)
The poem:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Death_Be_Not_Proud
Discussion:
https://lavelleporter.com/2015/02/13/readingwit/
"Nothing but a breath—a comma—separates life from life everlasting. It is very simple really. With the original punctuation restored, death is no longer something to act out on a stage, with exclamation points. It’s a comma, a pause."
Then comments:
> I think that “beat” and “borne” lack visual concreteness. Shouldn’t it be “paddle”? “Paddle” sounds a little silly, but that’s the metaphor Fitzgerald is using. (Those boats must be canoes, not steamboats. A steamboat wouldn’t care that much about a current.)
A reminder of the obscurity of Fitzgerald's analogy, which is specific to the technology of sailing: A "beat" is a course that will take the boat upwind -- always a challenge. And if the current of the water is pointed downwind, perhaps impossible.
Somehow none of the New Yorker editors caught this either.
Dang, says tomhow, is the better moderator.
- But when, Lord, when?!
- Verily I say unto thee, today shalt thou be with Me in Paradise.
- Ahhhh.
Shouldn't this one be "Verily I say unto thee today, thou shalt be with Me in Paradise?"
That was not on my top-5 list of things that may be in that article.
Don't ask me why, perhaps an OCD of the many I suffer, but I don't see the point of that if a new paragraph is two lines below
And they look ugly in web pages for titles, feature blocks, testimonials, etc
AI likes to use them everywhere when building web apps. I hate that and have to go find/replace every dot next to a closing tag
I'll have to refine my skills.md "Don't end paragraphs with a period"